Someone wrote in [personal profile] readingredhead 2011-01-31 02:40 pm (UTC)

Great story

Loved loved loved it, especially the story within story revelation that ties all of Beauty's thoughts together. Reminded me a lot of the Fables comic book, which is a good thing :)

Small critique: we don't know they're in the den/living room with its fireplace until the grate is mentioned, so they're sitting on a couch in an empty room.

-Teng

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