ext_137898 ([identity profile] readingredhead.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] readingredhead 2005-09-02 02:14 am (UTC)

Hey, your thoughts count! I pretty much agree with everything you said and you made a really good point about how quicker POV shifts will help create a more active tone; that's not something I'd really thought of before. Thanks for your input!
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