Hey people!

[readingredhead]

Hello all. Just a random entry to promote myself. Yay!

Basically I wrote this slightly-weird (okay, really weird) story-thing today that I decided to post on fictionpress.com where I have an account (my username there is Reading Redhead). It can be found here: Click me!

I guess I'm looking for commentary/criticism on it...it's kind of odd, and a new sort of style, so I want to know what people think of it. If people would review I'd give them a billion hugs! And stuff.

Yeah. Anyone interested in the few works of original fiction I have posted on the internet (yeah, I'm paranoid about my writing) can find my fictionpress profile here: And click this one too!

As I said, random entry of self-promotion. But I really am interested on your thoughts! After all, I figure you'll all end up reading my stuff later on...your opinions are important!

EDIT: I'm a genius and forgot my HTML so the links weren't showing up a while ago. I just fixed that.

Comments

[pippins-smile.livejournal.com]

i have a feeling sweetscribbles will be leaving her review... ^__^ *gringrin*

[readingredhead.livejournal.com]

Ooh, thanks muches for the review! I'm glad you liked it, I personally thought it was just really weird... I stole the italicized words thingie from a writer on fanfiction.net, I think. I was just fooling around and decided to try and write something in that style.

As for the minimal description of the shadow-dwellers...at first *I* wasn't even sure what they were. So I figured I could describe them later...and they I didn't get around to it. :) That's writing for ya.

[pippins-smile.livejournal.com]

It seems to have a mind of its own sometimes, eh? ^_^

Glad you appreciated the review, and thank YOU for the review on Thig's story. I did sort of rush the end, didn't I? Heh...