I think I like the italics form better, if only because that's how I tend to write things out.
And for your double-protangonist situation... First off, that's an awesome thing, I think. I really don't have a definite preference for that, but I do think that near the end of the book, it will push the reader more to the edge of their seat, so to speak, if the changes became more rapid. I don't think the effect would be the same if the changes were quick in the beginning; you know what I'm saying?
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Date: 2005-09-01 09:58 pm (UTC)And for your double-protangonist situation... First off, that's an awesome thing, I think. I really don't have a definite preference for that, but I do think that near the end of the book, it will push the reader more to the edge of their seat, so to speak, if the changes became more rapid. I don't think the effect would be the same if the changes were quick in the beginning; you know what I'm saying?
Hope I helped. =)